We are a Year 5/6 class in Papakura, South Auckland, New Zealand. This is our third year of digital immersion and so we are doing lots of learning on our chrome books. We love sharing our work and achievements with everyone, so we try and blog often. Please have a look and leave us a comment. We really enjoy hearing what other people think and have been doing in their class.
Tuesday, September 20, 2016
Our Simile Poem
In Room 2 we are learning about similes through acrostic poems.
We have 5 minutes to come together at the end of everyday and think about what we learned.
Today we talked about the poems we are writing, because we are so smart we decided to quickly wrote a poem.
Sometimes it is hard not using the similes we think are cool because they don't fit with our name.
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Hello, my name is Stevie-lee and I am a student at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how much powerful words you added to your poem it reminded me of an acrostic poem I made about camp. I think next time you could make a slideshow of all the smiling poems you have made
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Hi, my name is Sylvia from Waikowhai Primary School. I really enjoyed reading your poem, It has really powerful words in it. It reminded me when I tried to make a poem about a happy camper in my class, Maybe next time you could add photos about the poem around it. Check out my blog at http://wpssylviah.blogspot.co.nz/
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